It feels a little melodramatic and amatuerish at points (the zoom in on that guy in the beginning looks like it wasn't a camera zoom, but just resizing the video; it comes out blurry), but that's not anything that takes away from the wholeness of it too much. I like the couch scene; it's pretty silly.
And I'm pretty sure that Newgrounds is for animation, music, and illustrations only, but it's nice to see live-action on this site because of just that.